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Oppressive, prickly pain. It began a few
days ago and I’m literally
going out of my mind. I’d taken the dogs for a romp
in the woods,
and figured I’d trespassed into a toxic bush or plant of some sort.
At
first my flesh tingled like a million skittering spiders were
beneath the surface, I
started to scratch. And scratch, and scratch.
My incessant fingernail abrasions produced
scores of welts. I
looked like a victim of abuse, and felt like one.
Since
I looked like a bloated red leper, I’d called in sick to
work the past two
days. Slathering anti-itch lotions and soaking in
the tub only irritated the
condition. When I witnessed the
proliferating mounds that erupted over my body like a severe case
of chicken pox, I made a doctor’s appointment for that afternoon.
of chicken pox, I made a doctor’s appointment for that afternoon.
Suddenly,
the obnoxious sting became unbearable. Trembling
uncontrollably, my ballooning body
felt like it was going to explode.
A quivering lunatic, I clutched my cell
phone and keyed in
911. I then saw a microscopic gap open on my arm, and out
crawled what looked like a bug, a bug with wings. Swatting at the
bug, my stomach lurched, I ran into the bathroom.
A scream lodged in my throat as the intense pain shattered my
brain. Hunched over the commode, an army of arcane insects
ripped my skin apart and flit about the tiny room. The ubiquitous
throb somewhat subsided and my flesh resembled a pin-pricked
cushion of bloody holes.
brain. Hunched over the commode, an army of arcane insects
ripped my skin apart and flit about the tiny room. The ubiquitous
throb somewhat subsided and my flesh resembled a pin-pricked
cushion of bloody holes.
At the moment, I dragged in a choppy, whimpering breath, and
heard ominous buzzing. The walls were no longer peachy
colored, they were black and undulated.
Vibrating the room like an immense beehive were swarms of bizarre
winged insects. Horrified, I
watched them devour one another,
expanding in size and appeared like ravenous cannibals.
Run—
I thought instantly, run. I jerked, ready to bolt out the door
when the buzzing melted to a low hum. Looping my eyes around
the room, the insects seemed to notice my
presence. I froze.
The
last thing I remember, the bombardment of whirring
winged insects. And my
screams.