Hollywood's affinity for remaking old movies is widely known, read and see if you recognize my remake with a twist. Hope you enjoy my flash fiction story.
Withered Bones
Tessa
eased into the overstuffed chair, strategically half-hidden behind the curtains
in front of the picture window. She ached from hours spent at the computer
putting the finishing touches on her murder mystery novel, a sequel to her
first publication. Years of hard work had finally paid off.
Gazing out of the second story window, Tessa watched as evening invaded the sky. She slanted her head into the curtains, dust tickled
her nose. The glass overlooked a garden court which connected two low-rise
buildings. Temperate currents shifted the cotton curtains bringing with
them varied sounds of apartment dwellers.
Tessa
craned her neck to see Lorraine Polk’s terrier digging in Mrs. Birken’s flower
patch.
“Shoo,”
Mrs. Birken yelled at the dog waving her arms. She was leaning out of her first
floor window. “Lorraine get your damn dog out of my garden!” She screamed.
“Next time I see your dog digging in my flowers I’m gonna strangle it!”
Lorraine’s
second floor window slid open and she leaned out. “Elvira, you old coot. Leave
my dog alone.”
Tessa
could easily see Lorraine breeze through her apartment door. Seconds later she
was on the outside porch calling her dog. With the terrier in her arms, she
turned to see Elvira glaring from the glass. Lorraine’s hand signal was evident,
Tessa snickered.
As
darkness reigned, showers of light spilled from dozens of rectangular windows
banding the courtyard with an insipid glow. Tessa sat in semi-darkness, happy
to gather intrigue for her next novel by viewing her neighbors. Peeling her
eyes from the scene, she took inventory of the end table beside her.
Tessa
smiled. Before departing, her assistant had supplied her with a hot cup of tea
still furling with white steam and a plate of cookies. Just within reach were
her father’s spy glasses. She stretched her body sideways and gripped the
leather case with shaky hands.
Tessa’s
fingers fumbled with the bindings on the binoculars. She held the lenses to her
eyes and checked on the Rusoff’s apartment, three windows to the right of Polk’s.
The Rusoff’s had the propensity of sleeping with the curtain’s open, and Evie
liked to read in bed well into the night. Last week, Tessa’s heart skipped a
beat when she spied Evie reading her newly released novel, The Boning Knife. Truthfully, Tessa felt sorry for the miserable,
quarrelsome couple. Their apartment had been silent for days; Evie was presumably
out of town for some undisclosed reason.
As
usual, Adolph Rusoff was at the kitchen table sharpening his cache of lethal
looking knives. His face twisted, he seemed to relish the gleaming metal as he
sliced through the meat bone without resistance. Tessa shuddered. Focusing the binoculars, Tessa observed a book
on the table in front of Adolph, it was The
Boning Knife.
She should be thanking Adolph and his thick Russian
accent; The Boning Knife was fictionally
based on the Rusoff’s. Tessa had spun a grisly tale: A Russian Immigrant
married a heinous girl for convenience. Enduring two years of a wretched relationship
the Russian had disposed of his wife. Utilizing the bathtub, the Russian
butchered her into tiny sections, and progressively stuffed body parts into the
food disposal. After meticulously grinding up her bones, he’d buried the shards
into the garden.
Tessa
noticed a light switch on in the corner apartment. Her binocular eyes eagerly looped
to Hogan Black. Hogan ripped off his tie, shirt, and unbuckled his belt and let
his trousers drop to the floor, blue boxers hugged his tight rump. Tessa breathed
heavily. Her lancing gaze adhered to the defined specimen strutting to his
weight machine. Hogan’s tendency to work-out on a daily basis was a precious
gift for Tessa.
One
day she’d met him in the courtyard. Hogan was amiable and ruggedly handsome and
Tessa had fallen madly in love. A low purr rumbled in her throat as she watched
him. Her nights were filled with dreams of Hogan.
Thinking
of dreams, Tessa yawned. She was exhausted.
She
scanned over to the Rusoff’s apartment. It was pitch dark and the bedroom
curtains were uncharacteristically closed. A flash attracted Tessa’s eyes to
their kitchen window. A flaming match glinted off Adolph’s wire-rimmed glasses.
He was sitting at the table lighting a cigarette. He was smiling in her
direction. She flinched and dropped the binoculars.
Tessa’s
arthritic hands groped nervously for her metal walker. With great exertion, she
lugged upward and hobbled her withered bones to bed.
Very nice Cathrina! Reminded me a little of Alfred Hitchcock's Rear Window with Jimmy Stewart. Love the twist at the end :)
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Exactly, with a twist! Thanks, Deb!
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